If I could rewrite a part it the book it would be when the men in Port Angeles are following Bella. I think it would have been more exciting if Edward would have fought them or something different. It sounded like he didn't get out of the car.
Bella meets Edward's family and go to play baseball with them during a thunder storm. Most of Edward's family likes Bella, except for Rosalie. Rosalie thinks Bella will uncover their secret and they will have to move away. While they are playing baseball Alice sees others coming. They hear them playing and come to play. They get there are smell Bella. This is as far as I am.
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